Composition: Narrative Essay (Revision) (Thursday; 4/3)

K: Know how to create a draft of our story.

U: Understand which word and phrase to convey feeling and atmosphere.

D: Write a continuation of a narrative story.


Words of the Day

1. Speech marks

2. Draft


Do you remember the features of narrative writing?

1. Setting: Helps the reader to imagine where and when it happened.

2. Characters: The people, animals, or even objects in the story.

3. Problem: The conflict or issue that goes wrong.

4. Suspense: Gives the reader excitement or anxiety to know what happens further in the story.

5. Resolution/Ending: How the problem was solved or how the story ended.


Checklist

When writing a narrative story, always use a checklist to keep track of your essay.

A) I am properly capitalizing my words.

B) I am using proper speech marks and punctuations.

C) I am using 1 or 2-finger spacing at the start of each paragraph.

D) I have skipped one line for each new paragraph. 

E) The word count is 200-250 words.

F) I have rechecked my spelling.


Homework

Here is a short passage of a narrative story. Your task is to continue where it left off.

Hilda's New Pet


   Today was the happiest day of Hilda's life. During breakfast, her parents told her that she would be getting a pet of her own! Hilda had always wanted a pet. She proved how responsible she was by doing her chores and taking care of her school hamster last weekend. And now, thanks to her hard work, all would be rewarded.

   The sound of the doorbell shook her away from her thoughts. "I'll get it!" she responded. Excited to see the type of animal she would take care of, Hilda ran towards the front door...


Now it's your turn to continue the story. Look at these questions when you're making your draft and story:

1. What kind of animal was it?

2. How did Hilda react when she saw it?

3. What was the problem that Hilda faced?

4. Was Hilda able to solve the problem?

5. How would you like to end this story?


Take note when you are doing your homework.

1. You should create a draft before your essay. The draft can be in a form of 5W1H.

2. Your draft and essay should be written in your Composition book.

3. Do not forget the day and date.

4. Write this in your Homework Journal - Hilda's New Pet Narrative Essay. Composition. Due: Monday (8/3)

5. Submit pictures of your work in Homeroom Course -> English folder -> Week 25-> Comprehension - Hilda's New Pet.

Comments

  1. Evan Hates PicklezMarch 3, 2021 at 5:46 PM

    1. a shark

    2. amazed

    3. it might eat her alive

    4. no she got eaten

    5. she gets eaten

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  2. Cassidy TanMarch 3, 2021 at 10:25 PM

    1. Teacup Pomeranian

    2. Hilda was surprised because it was adorable.

    3. The Pomeranian was always hungry.

    4. Yes

    5. The Pomeranian became very sensible and could get its own food so Hilda and the Pomeranian became very friendly with each other.

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  3. exotic ratMarch 8, 2021 at 1:19 AM

    1. Hamster

    2. It was her dream pet

    3. Hamster always so hungry

    4. Yesh she did

    5. She managed to get the hamster to find food on his own

    - Aliyah

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